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Mai Hoang Anh - 04/04/2012 21:20

THE MOST BEAUTIFUL DAY OF YOUR LIFE

GOING TO SCHOOL...........

you know that, when I and every one who was six came to primary shool!! with me, that was the best day.

In the morning, after I had had breakfast, my dad and mom drove me to school.

During the way to school, I thought a lot: how was my teachers and my friends? I would miss home so much. what could I do? Thought thought and thought.........I was standing in front of the entrance of the school.

I came to class with a lot of feeling such as being new to the surroundings and really nervous, but after a short time, I made lots of friends

Yeal!! of course that was very happy, I talked to them a lot about my mom my dad and my sister!! wow!! they also told me about thier family, that was so interesting,

And I started to talk with some girls in my class, they was so pretty. well, I am just a small boy so I just feel like this

Finally, I met my teacher, she was tall and had long hair. she was wearing Ao Dai- the traditional dress in Viet Nam.

Here,I studied a lot of good things, I knew how to read, writeand the pronunciation, Besides, I could play games. I was acttracted by this games. It was interesting!!! the game's name was LUCKY NUMBER.

The air of the class made was warm!! I did not miss home a lot!! I had friends and teachers, they taught me a lot.

I will never forget that day

that was the most beautiful the in my life.

Dung Nguyen - 04/04/2012 21:33

bai viet cua ban hay nhung van con sai phan grammar va spelling

Mai Hoang Anh - 04/04/2012 21:42

tks nhak!!minh vẫn nghiep dư mah

Phạm Thị Thân - 04/04/2012 22:26

Mình có 1 vài thắc mắc nè: I and every one mà sao dùng Was?

The air of the class made was warm?

Nam_pro - 04/04/2012 23:20

on the way to N : tren duong toi dau

Jenny Phan - 05/04/2012 00:06

The best day in mylife maybe only God knows. ^_^. Be coz i'm still standing on one of three equal ways( i hope that). :)

But up to now, i like best 5 days when i were in Singapore in Dec, 2011. It is very amazing.

i wish i can come back Sing in this year...

Sweet Cherry - 05/04/2012 00:46

you know that, when I and every one ( every one and me) who was (were) six came to primary shool!! with me, that was the best day.

In the morning, after I had had breakfast, my dad and mom ( informal, nen dung my parents) drove me to school.

During the way to school, I thought a lot: how was ( were) my teachers and my friends? I would miss home so much. what could I do? Thought thought and thought... I was standing in front of the entrance ( nen dung the gate) of the school.

I came to class with a lot of feeling such as being new to the surroundings and really nervous, but after a short time, I made ...(a) lots of friends

of course. that was very happy, I talked to them a lot about my mom my dad and my sister! they also told me about thier( their) families, that was so interesting,

And I started to talk with some girls in my class, they was so pretty. well, I am ( was)just a small boy so I just liked that

Finally, I met my teacher, she was tall and had long hair. she was wearing Ao Dai- the traditional dress in Viet Nam.

Here,I studied a lot of good things, I knew how to read, write ( writting) and the pronunciation, Besides, I could play games. I was acttracted by this games. It was interesting!!! the game's name was LUCKY NUMBER.

The air of the class made was warm!! I did not miss home a lot!! I had friends and teachers, they taught me a lot.

I will never forget that day

that was the most beautiful day in my life.

bai viet thieu chat che, dung nhieu tu vung khong trong trong van viet, hoi nhieu loi ngu phap.

good luck!