Lương Nguyễn Kiến Tường
Keeping a pet.
Luong Nguyen Kien Tuong. SET-IELTS program for overseas studies.
Writing: Keeping a pet.
I had a pet, a cute dog, Lu. My father gave me Lu when I was six years old. That was a
present which I loved it very much. Lu was a Phu Quoc dog, so he was smaller than the
other dogs in my house. But Lu was so smart, he could catch mouses which was bigger
than him. Additionally, he was always very lively when someone new arrived at my
house, jumbing up and wagging his tail. Especially, he had prevented a robber when
nobody was in home. The robber wanted to steal something valuable. He climbed up the
window and moved to my room slowly and carefully. Luckily, he didn't know that Lu
was staying in my room. When Lu saw the suspect man, he had bark a lot and loudly
until my neighbors arrested the offender. After that, my parents love Lu mor and he
became a member of my family. Day by day, I and Lu grew up together, we had many
memories such as playing games or doing exercise each other. But four years ago, he
was sick. I was very worry. I didn't want him die. I tried taking care of him but he still
died. I cried a lot, I missed him very much. He was my best friend.
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Phổ thôngCho mình góp ý nha:
- I had a ped which was a cute dog. His name is Lu
- mouse => mice (số nhiều)
- he was very lively because he rushed at me, jumbing up and wagging his tail when someone arrived at my house
- he had prevented a burglar when nobody was at home ( burglar : trộm nhà còn robber là cướp)
- I tried to take care of him ( try+ Ving: thủ làm gì còn try +to V : cố gắng làm gì)
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